Score: 10

"I Won"

submission: Pick your Own Adventure!

date: February 23, 2008

That was an EXTREMELY intense game, it had me on the edge of my toes ever second. One minute I was like "I'm asleep" and the next I'm like "I'm on fire".

Crazy stuff.

Score: 6

"Very Clever"

submission: -Platform Tutorial-

date: February 22, 2008

Well I thought the idea was very clever, certainly showed what the final result was better than other tutorials do. It probably could have gone into more depth, but it's good for someone who already has some actionscript knowledge.

You should also maybe add information on how to make the game more personalized. You kind of just hand the user a bunch of code and get them to copy paste it. It works, but the created game will be so unoriginal it's sad. You should try to show the user how to use the skills you teach to create something original.

Score: 7

"A Good Intro..."

submission: The Brass Seal: Ep 1a

date: November 27, 2007

It was a good start but could use some work. The colors were a bit too random for my eyes to take, however the animation was done pretty well. Voice acting was so-so, but some parts didn't sound enthusiastic enough (the yell). Looks like a promising series, good job.